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Chapter 8 - Through the Veil of Sleep

The transition from a deep coma to full consciousness is rarely like the movies. It is not a sudden gasp and a clear-eyed awakening. It is a slow, grueling climb up a very steep, very dark mountain.

But over the next 24 hours, Julian climbed.

He started with small movements. A twitch of the foot. The turning of his head from side to side. Then came the coughing, as his body forcefully rejected the intrusion of the breathing tube.

"He's ready," Dr. Aris announced the following afternoon.

Sarah, Lily, and Grandmother stood at the foot of the bed. The tension in the room was electric.

Dr. Aris carefully deflated the cuff of the endotracheal tube. "Alright, Julian. Take a deep breath for me, and I'm going to pull this out. One, two, three."

With a swift, smooth motion, the tube was removed.

Julian gagged, his face contorting in pain, and then he let out a harsh, ragged cough. It was the most beautiful sound Sarah had ever heard. It was the sound of air moving freely through his lungs.

A nurse quickly placed an oxygen mask over his nose and mouth.

Julian lay still for a moment, panting, his chest rising and falling naturally.

Slowly, agonizingly slowly, his eyelids began to flutter. They parted slightly, revealing a sliver of hazel eyes. The bright hospital lights made him wince, and he squeezed them shut again.

"Dim the lights," Dr. Aris ordered softly.

The room plunged into a soft, gentle dimness.

Julian tried again. His eyes opened. They were glassy, unfocused, darting around the room as his brain struggled to process reality. He looked at the ceiling, the monitors, the strange man in scrubs.

Then, he turned his head to the right.

He saw Sarah. She was crying so hard she couldn't speak, her hands clamped over her mouth.

Julian’s brow furrowed. Beneath the oxygen mask, his lips moved, but no sound came out. His throat was entirely raw.

He moved his gaze down.

Standing right beside his arm, exactly where she had been in the casket, exactly where she had been for the last week, was Lily.

Julian’s eyes locked onto his daughter. The confusion and panic in his gaze instantly melted away. A profound, overwhelming softness washed over his face.

He weakly lifted his right arm. It was shaking violently with the effort, heavy as lead. But he reached out.

Lily stepped forward and gently took his hand, guiding it to her cheek.

Julian pulled his oxygen mask down with his free hand.

His voice was a gravelly, barely audible rasp, destroyed by days of intubation, but the word he spoke echoed in their hearts louder than a shout.

"...Lily."

"I'm here, Dad," Lily said, a giant, radiant smile breaking across her face.

Julian let out a breath that sounded like a laugh and a sob combined. "You... you waited."

"I told them you were just sleeping really deep," Lily said matter-of-factly, though tears were streaming down her face. "But you owe me a fishing trip."

Julian’s eyes filled with tears, spilling over onto the hospital pillow. He looked up at Sarah, extending his other hand to her. Sarah practically collapsed onto the bed, wrapping her arms carefully around his neck, burying her face in his shoulder.

"I thought I lost you," Sarah wept. "I thought you were gone."

"I was," Julian whispered hoarsely, kissing the side of her head. He looked back at Lily. "But she pulled me back."

Grandmother stood at the back of the room, wiping her eyes with a handkerchief. She looked at Dr. Aris, who was furiously blinking away his own tears, pretending to check a monitor.

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"Well, Doctor," Grandmother said, her voice full of pride and relief. "It seems my granddaughter is a better diagnostician than the county clinic."

Dr. Aris chuckled, a wet, emotional sound. "Ma'am, I will never, ever doubt that little girl again."

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