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Part 3

The months that followed were a grueling test of endurance, sleep deprivation, and fierce, uncompromising love. The alarm on the pulse oximeter became the cruelest soundtrack of my life. It woke us up at dawn, interrupted our afternoons, and shattered our nights.

Yet, amidst the terror of cardiac episodes and endless medication schedules—digoxin every morning, diuretics every afternoon, potassium supplements mixed into high-calorie formula—something extraordinary happened.

Alma started to grow.

By her first birthday, she had put on four pounds. Her cheeks had rounded out from sunken hollows into soft, rosy cushions, and her dark, expressive eyes were constantly scanning the world with bright, mischievous curiosity. She couldn't crawl yet—her weak heart could not sustain the physical exertion—but she could sit propped up on a mountain of pillows, banging a plastic spoon against a tin cup with joyful abandon.

One afternoon in early spring, while I was sitting on the living room rug feeding her pureed squash, the doorbell rang.

It was a sharp, official ring that made my stomach drop. Visitors were rare. My friends from before the divorce had long since drifted away, intimidated by my reclusive life and my sudden plunge into specialized medical motherhood.

I wiped Alma’s chin with a napkin, hoisted her carefully into my arms with her portable oxygen tank slung over my shoulder like a heavy purse, and walked to the front door.

Standing on the porch was a tall, impeccably dressed woman in a charcoal-gray suit. Her hair was pulled back into a severe chignon, and she held a leather briefcase in one hand. It wasn't Beatriz. It was someone much more formidable.

—Good afternoon. Are you Mariana Fuentes? —she asked, her voice crisp and professional.

—Yes. Can I help you?

—My name is Elena Valenzuela. I am the senior legal representative appointed by the family court supervisor’s office. I am here to conduct a mandatory unannounced welfare and custody review for the minor currently designated as Alma Fuentes.

The name Valenzuela hit me like a physical blow. I had heard whispers in the DIF hallways about senior inspectors who specialized in reclaiming foster children for biological relatives or institutional re-placement if irregularities were found.

—An unannounced review? —I stammered, my grip tightening around Alma’s small body—. Beatriz didn't mention—

—Compliance regulations do not require advance notice, Ms. Fuentes. May I come in? Or must I note your hesitation in my report?

I swallowed hard, forcing my panic down into the pit of my stomach. I stepped back and opened the door wide.

—Please, come in.

Elena Valenzuela stepped into my hallway. Her sharp eyes didn't miss a single detail. She noted the hand sanitizer dispenser mounted by the front door, the extra oxygen tanks neatly stacked in the corner of the living room, the hospital-grade air purifier humming quietly in the corner, and the spotless, organized state of the nursery.

She sat down on the sofa without being invited, placed her briefcase across her knees, and pulled out a thick metal clipboard.

—Sit down, Ms. Fuentes. Let us review your logs. I need to see the precise administration times for the cardiac glycosides, the daily weight charts, the medical emergency protocols signed by your pediatric cardiologist, and your remote work financial audits.

For the next two hours, Elena interrogated me with the precision of a prosecuting attorney. She checked every logbook, cross-referenced every prescription bottle with the pharmacy receipts, and even examined Alma’s breathing patterns while the baby slept peacefully in her crib.

I answered every question without a single stumble, my voice firm, though my hands were shaking inside the pockets of my cardigan.

Finally, Elena closed her clipboard with a sharp click. She looked up at me, her expression still unreadable, devoid of warmth or praise.

—Your documentation is immaculate, Ms. Fuentes. The medical equipment is state-of-the-art, and the child’s physical development is remarkably stable given her baseline prognosis. Objectively, you are providing a standard of care that exceeds what the state could offer in an institutional setting.

I let out a breath I felt like I had been holding for two hours. —Thank you.

—However —Elena continued, raising a single, perfectly sculpted eyebrow—, your legal standing remains precarious. As you know, the mandatory ninety-day abandonment window concluded last month. Normally, this is when we initiate the formal termination of parental rights and transition the foster agreement into a permanent adoption track.

—Yes? And why hasn't that happened? —I asked, leaning forward, the panic rising again.

Elena slowly opened her briefcase and pulled out a single sheet of heavy cream paper bearing the official seal of the Family Court of Guadalajara.

—Because three days ago, a legal petition was filed.

The living room seemed to tilt on its axis. The hum of the oxygen machine suddenly sounded deafening.

—A petition... from whom? —I whispered, my voice barely audible.

—A biological claimant has stepped forward.

The words echoed in the quiet room like a gunshot.

—A... a mother? —I choked out, tears instantly blurring my vision.

—Not the mother —Elena corrected quietly, watching my reaction closely—. The biological grandmother on the maternal side. She has provided verified DNA testing, birth hospital records matching the date of abandonment, and a sworn testimony stating that she was coerced by the infant’s teenage father at the time to abandon the child out of extreme poverty, and that she has spent the last year searching for her granddaughter.

I couldn't breathe. The air in the room vanished. I looked down at Alma, who was waking up from her nap, stretching her tiny arms and blinking sleepily up at me, entirely oblivious to the fact that her entire existence was about to be torn apart by a stranger with a piece of paper.

—She wants her back? —I asked, my voice breaking into a jagged sob—. After a year? After the hospital told us no one wanted her? Where was she when Alma was coding on the operating table? Where was she when I stayed up thirty-six hours straight pumping air into her lungs?

Elena looked down at her papers, her professional armor slipping for just a fraction of a second, revealing a profound, weary sadness.

—The law does not always care about who stayed, Ms. Fuentes. Sometimes, the law only cares about who gave birth. The custody hearing is scheduled for next Tuesday morning at the municipal family court. You will be served with an official summons by tomorrow afternoon.

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She stood up, buttoned her jacket, and walked toward the door. With her hand on the doorknob, she paused and looked back at me over her shoulder.

—For what it’s worth, Ms. Fuentes... buy a very good lawyer. You’re going to need a miracle.

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